My heart
feels like the spaces between the s t a r s dark empty devoid of light
15 Comments
6/12/2017 10:50:06 pm
why do you feel that way..... but then it is just a passing thing.. I know as I have been there countless times as well...
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6/13/2017 05:05:29 am
It takes a lot to share such deep feelings, I admire you! I love you site too :)
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6/13/2017 06:59:26 pm
The spaces are there as to accommodate more - you have a big heart and love to give.
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Blair villanueva
6/13/2017 09:33:42 pm
Ladies and gentlemen, let's help pull her up to the light! Hugging you virtually.
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Betty
6/14/2017 03:09:32 am
Cheer up as the world still have many beautiful things surrounding you.
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6/15/2017 06:51:23 pm
Sending virtual hugs to you! Hope you feel better, there's alot more people who are concerns about you! Stay strong!
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6/16/2017 03:33:47 am
What a lovely premise. You have a good talent in poetry :)
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Shivani
6/17/2017 05:47:27 pm
Hope you are feeling much better dear. The poem is lovely.
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6/19/2017 06:33:31 pm
Hope you are coping better now. Look at a brighter side
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4/22/2024 09:17:41 am
We shall have no space-between-the-stars
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